I need help with my story?

ok i need help because i am having trouble thinking of ways to say this

the girl is in the forest

the dragons are hunting and a young dragon gets her

its young so it doesn't kill her.

they take her to the dragon cave.



i want the reader to guess she has been hunted.

but you will not know the dragon is young till they are in the cave.

there is 2 types of dragon

a dragon

and a human dragon thing. (really a human with wings claws and a tail.)

she is going to be taken by the human dragon thing

i think the girl will be like 13. (about my age maybe a little older)



i just need some ideas of how she should be taken and that.

im really stuck on this.



this is all i have so far



It was dark. The dragon hideout forest was frightening at night. The wind swept through the trees. Everything was silent. She heard footsteps in the distance. The cries of a deer screaming through her ears. All was silent again.



thank you



these are just ideas im not going to copy and paste your work .





oh and by the way

don't make up your own beginning.

it's my story and these dragons are my own dragons its my Imagination and the young dragon doesn't kill her because she is learning.

i don't care if in real life wild animals know to kill it isn't real life.

and i don't want her falling into a hole and into a dragon nest because in my world all the dragons live together and not in holes in a cave.

and don't tell me to give up

also the girl is the main character so she isn't going to be killedI need help with my story?
Well they're hunting her in a forest. She is looking back running from the dragons and she doesn't see the human/dragon besides a tree waiting for her. It takes her with his tail by her leg and she falls . And there you go, the girl is capturedI need help with my story?
You could have it like she starts running, and something is steadil .getting closer to her. Maybe it could grab her from behind, and she never sees what it is. She could break away and try to run, and fall and hit her head on a rock or something, and wake up with the dragon, wherever it takes her.

Hope this helps (:

And I'd be interested in reading this, when it's done, if that's okay.

Thanks. (:I need help with my story?
she needs to have a reason to e in the woods. if you wanted you can always go on the line of hearing the forest was haunted and going in on a dare or just a curious girl while in the woods it dosnt really matter how the dragon finds her... the reason in the wods is the real problem and the story is very good so far i know i would read it!