Is this a good beginning plot for my story?

My main characters are



Lucifer- a dragon boy who is half dragon half Tuatha D茅 Danann ( sort of an elvish race of sorts)

he is 16 5'8 (leaving room to grow) wing span of 16 ft and jet black hair with some streaks of a neon-like green in it that is natural ,paler skin that gets a greenish tint when hes angry, and has big 3 toed, scaled dragons feet he wears in converse that he doesn't take off unless home with family.



John(his current name)- john is this characters current name but he is 1 trillion 713 billion and a lot of other numbers, he was here before our planet existed or out galaxy for that matter, and our universe too, and helped in the making of it and several others and has fought in wars we cant imagine. At the moment he is a 23 year old male with light brown curly hair ,tan, is 6'2 and very "old school" and is amazed by technology by speaks fluently every language and every accent perfectly, because he helped create them all. he has no shows of magic but has a powerful feel around him that draws people towards him but is a very kind and friendly person.



Anastasia Elizabeth Pendragon- she is 4' 9 , dark brown hair and usually wears fingerless gloves,and is 22 and currently best Friend with john but doesn't know the extent of his age but thinks he is about 5000 years old not over 1 trillion. Anastasia is actually a witch and sorceress and is very rich and has a 2 year old son named Christoph.



The beginning stars with and introduction from johns point of View stating humanities great achievements that past umpteen thousand years, then says the greatest of what he has seen and what he has done.



After that we go into an all knowing third person point of view starting with Lucifer's day beginning on whatever day i begin writing this part and will hopefully get him to school where john has taken the role of a history teacher but john is very befuddled with humanities history and begins going into mythology and folklore in the first week.

John brings Anastasia in as a student teacher, because she is trying to get a degree in teaching mythology, and she has a debate with lucifer about dragon folklore and magic begins to stir and his wings burst out and his green ayes turn Yellow and his pupils to slits but john stops the rest of the student from seeing this and they become an unlikely trio of Friends.



then some sort of enemy, im thinking the FBI (american) will begin investigating and john will be taken in for questioning and that is all i have so far without going into great detail.





well what do you think? and suggestions?Is this a good beginning plot for my story?
sounds creative. you need to think of a logical way for dragons and elves to breed.... :) best wishes.



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http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?鈥?/a>Is this a good beginning plot for my story?
Well, first thing I have to say about it is that it is a little too busy. There is so much information that really doesn't seem necessary to the plot from what you've told us. Also, if "John" has lived for so long, I doubt he would be amazed by all the technology, unless he has been living away from civilization. The conflict is not developed enough to really comment on, other then to question what they would be investigating and why "John" would be questioned. Is the fact that all this magic and fantasy hidden from the rest of the world? You might want to emphasize that if it is what you meant, because otherwise it's just a bunch of unnessecary magic.



I can't really say if the plot is interesting because mostly what you have is character.Is this a good beginning plot for my story?
If you plan on publishing this, I'll tell you one thing..Christians wouldn't read it, just because of the fact that one of the character's names is Lucifer.